obeseity

1 of 3 kids in america are obese and it's not healthy. We are the most obese country in the world. But that's all because at school there is mostly junk food. Also if you want to buy milk or fruits the  ilks probably expired and the fruits are gross

fifa

Yesterday i talk about how i packed amazing players but today all of those players with the one player i packed in fifa 15. His name is benzema  he plays alongside ronaldo and James Rodriguez two great plyers. So i was just about to open a pack i thlught would be but i saw in the corner of my eye the real madrid symbol i thought i packed ronaldo be i saw it was benzema then i just spazed out.

Hot tube dares

I was at my friends house for new years eve. He has a hot tub he asked me in i want to go in an i said yes. So we put on our bathing suits and went in the hot tub it was very hot and frist but then i got use to it. The he said i dare you to go out of the hot tub and stand out in the cold we were just in our bathing suits so i did it. It wasn't to bad but i dared him to sit in the snow so he did that and said we should lay down in the snow i was a little Sacred at first but then it wasnt to bad i even rolled over in the snow.

Bad news

It was a normal day, around 5:30 my sister and dad were up stairs play fighting each other. Someone calls us so I ran to the phone like lightning, turns out it was a call from my mom. "I heard it's pretty bad i should probably call the police" she said to my grandma. Then I tried to talk to her but then she hung up or we lost connection. "OMG!" I shouted i started think about what could have happend she could have gotten kidnapped oe shes being held hostage!

in the house We tell my mom what happened and she goes i want to see this so i won’t be afraid and she is not afraid of ghost. we all walk up the stairs my mom's in the front we go around the corner in my parents room and we stop and stare at the door. My mom slowly walks into the room she looks around and she starts laughing she found a stuffed animal it was a duck with a party hat. So she squeezed it it said "leave now... why so soon the party just started". But it said leave now and paused for 5 seconds then it said why so soon the part just started. We all felt relieved that's when we noticed a shadow in the corner of the room. We all as a group approached it once we were 5 ft from the shadow it slowly turns and says at 2:14 "hello, GOODBYE!" then it ate us all that's when i woke up i was so glad it was a dream. It was 2:13 and there's a shadow in the corner of my room…

Kittens

It was winter we were driving to this house with kittens we were interested in once we got there we saw dogs in a fenced backyard and and a cat mailbox we knew this was the right place we get out of the car and knock on the door a lady opened she looked very tired she welcomed us inside and this time instead of see a couple of dogs we saw 10 dogs in the back yard.

I most proud of this year is my Say What? series. because I worked hard on that series and it is funny. also I'm am proud of it the most is that lots off people viewed it.

I'm am most proud of my Halloween story because i worked extremly hard on it and it is almost finished. it is my best work because i have been working on it for like 2 months. and the people i shared it to really like it.

My areas of improvement is the dialogue of my story's because i don't have enuff. and i need to work on my punctuation. also the description.

my areas i need to improve is dialogue . the details. and the punctuation.