Friday, December 4, 2015

I most proud of this year is my Say What? series. because I worked hard on that series and it is funny. also I'm am proud of it the most is that lots off people viewed it.

I'm am most proud of my Halloween story because i worked extremly hard on it and it is almost finished. it is my best work because i have been working on it for like 2 months. and the people i shared it to really like it.

My areas of improvement is the dialogue of my story's because i don't have enuff. and i need to work on my punctuation. also the description.

my areas i need to improve is dialogue . the details. and the punctuation.

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